Wednesday, February 6, 2013

1st draft

I am Indiana Jones
Brave and adventures
I fear no obstacle
Nor person
But i am not invincible
I am destroyed easily
By the game of love
I am weak
I'm Indiana Jones
I'm afraid of snakes
But fear no women
Call me a ladies man



2 comments:

  1. You do have to revise a spelling error. And try researching more about
    Indiana Jones' character and see if you can find more comparisons to
    him. And I think thats about it. I also like the metaphor you compared
    yourself to!

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  2. I just noticed I used a lot of "and's".

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